離2015年中考考試不到一年的時間了，中考考生可在平時做一些試題，題不在多，多了孩子也不做，在于精。做完之后一定要改錯，先想想自己錯在哪，再去看解析，逐漸糾正自己的思維或是彌補自己的漏洞。在中考英語作文考試中也是一樣的思路，避開一些常識性錯誤問題。

第一類錯位可以分為下面幾種：

1. 審題不清

如2014年一篇中考真題作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。

2.拼寫錯誤

拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發(fā)現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。

3.名詞單復數問題

誤 my father and my mother is all teacher。

正 my father and my mother are both teachers。

4.缺少動詞

在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有 動詞來構成，如：“我累了�！边@個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

誤 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

誤 the apples cheap. i'll take some。

正 the apples are cheap. i'll take some。

5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。

誤 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

6.代詞的誤用

英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分;此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯誤。

誤 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

7.句子不完整

有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

誤 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。

(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。

8.前后不一致

所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。

(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has ;同理，want應改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

改為 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.時態(tài)、人稱和數的搭配錯誤

漢語動詞無時態(tài)、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：

誤 when i get to the station the train leave。

正 when i got to the station the train had left。

10.綜合性錯誤

綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發(fā)，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。

第二錯誤：優(yōu)秀作文范文

范文1：〖題目〗請你仔細閱讀下面的招聘廣告。

Boys and girls aged 12-15.

Are you good with children?

Happy kids winter camp Needs help with:

sports music computers

Come and join us! Send your personal (個人) information to hkwc @163.com.

假如你是李平想要應聘，請你根據招聘廣告中的要求，在表格空白處至少填出兩項你所能做的事情。并根據表格中的所有信息，發(fā)一封e-mail，介紹你的個人情況、興趣愛好及能力。字數40～60。信的開頭、結尾已給出

Name——Age——School——Like——can

Li Ping——13——No.3 Middle School——Reading,computers,Playing basketball

Dear sir,

I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.

I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon.

Yours, Li Ping

〖范文〗Dear sir,

I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.

My name is Li Ping I am thirteen (years old). I study / am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I like reading and playing basketball. I like computers, too. I can play football well. I can stag many English songs, And I can dance and swim. I can surf the Internet and send e-mails.

I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon.

Yours,

Li Ping

范文2：〖題目〗假如你的爸爸是個醫(yī)生，曾參加了2003年的非典防治工作，雖然非典已經過去了，但是他對一家人的健康仍然很重視。請你寫一篇60詞左右的短文，講一下只要預防得當，疾病并不可怕。參考詞匯：personal health個人健康 spit吐痰;overwork使……過于疲勞 food and drink飲食

〖范文〗Keeping healthy

My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS.

He said,“We don't have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.”

My father and I like running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We don't spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.

范文3〖題目〗你的爸爸抽煙嗎?請寫一篇小短文描述抽煙的害處，回家后讀給你的爸爸聽。(60詞左右)提示如下：

1.抽煙有害健康,不能長壽;2.抽煙易導致疾病;3.抽煙還危害別人。

〖范文〗Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for women and children, too.

I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Let's enjoy clean air.

范文4〖題目〗有很多同學早晨上學不吃早餐，這是一個不好的習慣，對身體有很大的危害。請根據提示寫一篇短文，指出不吃早餐的危害。70個詞左右。��

提示：1.不吃早餐對身體有害;2.不吃早餐會影響上午聽課。

〖范文1〗

Every morning we have to go to school very early, so many of us don't have breakfast. It's very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It's a long time before lunch. If we don't eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we can't listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.

〖范文2〗How to keep healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food——more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don't feel well, you'd better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It's necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It's also very important.

范文5：〖題目〗中秋節(jié)的英語作文-The Mid-Autumn Festival

〖范文〗The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.

On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily.

At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.

〖譯文〗中秋節(jié)

中秋節(jié)是中國一個很重要的節(jié)日，在八月十五號。在節(jié)日來臨的前幾天，家庭中的每一個人都幫著打掃房子，把房子裝扮得漂漂亮亮的，燈籠掛在屋前。

晚上有一頓美餐，離家在外工作的人也要回來團圓。晚飯后，人們點亮燈籠，一般是紅色的圓燈籠。孩子們會高高興興地玩他們的玩具燈籠。

晚上月亮又圓又大，人們在賞月的同時吃著中秋節(jié)特別的食品——月餅。人們在一起回顧過去，展望未來。據說天上有一條龍，它要把月亮吞下去。為了保護月亮，孩子們要弄出很大的響動把龍嚇跑。

以上是中考英語作文應避免的錯誤內容，唯學網會為您整理其他科目的試題同時祝廣大考生在2015年中考中發(fā)揮出最佳水平，考出好成績!